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bombsandbandaids
this is positively beautiful. i like your symbolism that connects to your message. it is very empowering and inspiring. you could try to make it less (somewhat aggressively) targeted at unbelieving audiences if you want to edit. hope my feedback was helpful.
CalicoCarter
Definitely I love feedback. I don't quite understand what you mean by "(somewhat aggressively) targeted at unbelieving audiences" but if you could elaborate on that it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment.
bombsandbandaids
@CalicoCarter, i think when i wrote this comment i meant that it felt like it was talking at someone or some group of people and that felt a bit harsh. but now that ive re-read it i understand that was a theme you were going for.
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