Whoa. Whoa, whoa, whoa! Oh you can't just say that last bit and leave us hanging!

But really, interesting!! I love this so much. Their acts and role plays was so amusing to read and imagine and who'd knew she was such an actress XD

But wow. Lorca was cursed....and then she came. At first I was like, but did he realised what was special about her the moment she came and he was set free... and then he unveiled another truth that she has MAGIC BLOOD OMG ASKSDHSJFLA OKAY I DIDN'T THINK I EXPECTED THAT. So this is one proof. And I am now questioning her entire existence, maybe beginning from her mother because it was explained that the mom came from another village? Or her dad, who's so mysterious and acted aloof most times? Throughout the heritage and bloodline, I wonder what went on. 

Knowing Wren, she probably, maybe wouldn't believe him at first, though but there's so many evidences and how does that explain her entrance to the forsaken kingdom and palace, or the fire that didn't burn her hand? Ahhhh Chloe I need to know more! :O >.<

P.S - There's some tiny bit of mistakes that's a little bit evident when reading but it's not too obvious that it bothers me too much. Just thought I'd point it out, and also I think you may have forgotten to italicize the excerpt in the beginning. But these are just about it.

Other than that, well, EXCELLENT WORK.