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NazcaPilot
I like the set-up for your story. I'm interested to know just how she got into this position with the courts. There's definitely a story to be told in there. I hope it's touched upon in flashbacks. Also, I wish I knew more about where this takes place. I'm aware of the date but not much else. I'm guessing it's Canada, but it's only a guess. Anyway, that didn't really hinder my experience with this story. I just wish there was a little more detail. Then again, this is but the first chapter, so I'm sure plenty will be answered later. I'm interested to know more of Riley, too. I'll have to wait and see just how her introverted personality takes her. ^_^
Nakysha
Hmm...I never really had a specific place in mind, but since I'm from Canada and haven't seen a lot of the world, a lot of it will be based on the customs I know and whatnot. Though it truly can be in any first-world country. I'll make note of adding more detail, and can't wait to expand on Riley as a character. Thanks for giving such an in-depth review!
NazcaPilot
@Nakysha, You're quite welcome! Yeah, I just made that assumption given that being your home country. Like I said, it didn't ruin the experience for me, I just wish I had a sense of where we were in this story. I'd love to see what you do with Riley and her story in later chapters. Just keep at it, okay? :)
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