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Andrew Knight
Another great one. I'm curious, though... so far, there hasnt been much actual story drvoted to the resistance, only chatter and hints. Is this intentional? Will we learn more/see more of that action in the future? PM me if you don't want to give anything away to everyone!
8 年前
Frances
Haha, well that's why I needed to get Georgiana into town to the Black Gytrash. Do you think its getting a bit slow though? Could I get some more action in? Because I've wondered.
8 年前
Andrew Knight
In my opionion, its just about time for a little action. You've set up your charaters and your setting very solidily, and now you can build some heart pounding plot on top of that foundation!
8 年前
Frances
@Andrew Knight, I agree. I have it planned out but I think you're right, I will be bringing it a little more to the forefront. Did the wolf attack give it a little action?
8 年前
Andrew Knight
Oh yes, the wolf part was great. Now would be a great time to capitalize on all the tension youve built up
8 年前
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