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TheOtherRox
I like your story idea a lot! There are a couple of small issues with verb tenses, but nothing too dramatic! Maybe you could open a spot for a beta reader that could catch them for you if you want! Keep up the good work!
EllaBrock
Thank you ^^ I'm sorry for that... i'm not a native speaker so it's a bit confusing but i'm trying to learn ^^.
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