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佧萊
不錯的想像，只是在敘述品級的敘述有點不夠明瞭，標點符號的使用也有點缺乏
6 years ago
白琅
我會加油的！
這是首次寫小說第一次就寫我最喜歡的玄幻類
6 years ago
佧萊
@白,加油 如果有什麼我能建議的話我會盡量提出的 期待未來的發展
6 years ago
白琅
@莫黎,謝謝
6 years ago
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