I apologize for that. Honestly i found myself slipping in and out of third person while i was writing cause third person is usually how i write. I tried to edit most of that out but i guess i missed a paragraph, so I do apologize.

And ah, I gotcha. I probably meant to type suit and my brain just derped and added the e on the end.

The hand slicing part was a tad too dramatic for my tastes looking back now, and is a part I'll either edit out, or perhaps change the nature of the oath a tad. But I do like the idea of the goddess stealing the motion of their hand should they lie.

Overall I just want to thank you so much for all the feedback you've given me thus far, and its so wonderful to hear that you're enjoying the story. I honestly haven't touched it since Nanowrimo because I'm trying to recuperate after busting out all of this story in that 30 day timeframe. So there's a lot I have to go back and edit which I'll be doing as I work to finish up this story. 

@RavenDuchess, I'm not sure if I'll be able to read the whole thing, I have loads on my plate at the moment, but I'm glad to hear the feedback is helping! I hope I don't come across mean, I'm tryin' to help. 

@CJ Gem, Oh no it's totally okay I completely understand. I'm a college student so i completely relate with you on the whole no time thing lol