Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. By the way, is there anything you think I can improve on? When it's done, I'm going to go back and edit, so any feedback is appreciated. :) 

Probably be a bit more descriptive on what's going on, just a brief summary here and there. That way people will know what's going on. Like at the earth quake it took me a bit to figure out what was going on. And make the chapters a bit longer, I find that people would prefer it to take longer than get super short chapters often. Other than that, it's absolutely perfect! They are so cute together. 

All right, thanks! Yeah, I have to agree with you about the descriptions. At first, this was only planned to be a short story, but then I got a little carried away. Sorry about that. XD 


I've definitely been trying to make the conversations longer each time, but it's difficult when I'm also trying to make sure each conversation has a specific point. I'll find a way to make it work, though. 

Thanks again. :) 

No problem, defiantly impressed with your work! Would you mind checking out my stories 'Fighting the Dark' and Wings to Fly'?

Sure! Do you want me to give you feedback, too? 

If you wouldn't mind, that would be great!