Reply - 三題寫作練習第三回 | Penana

/replycomment.php?id=25930&chapter=11&c=a122966&o=2352&parent_id=0

Reply - 三題寫作練習第三回 | Penana

Reply - 三題寫作練習第三回

Search stories, writers or societies

Continue ReadingClear All

What Others Are ReadingRefresh

See more results for ""

X

Never miss what's happening on Penana!

Turn on notifications

Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.

等到柳絮大的投稿了，果然有痛到心QQ
前面平鋪直敘，到最後那關於愛情與選擇的惆悵都很不錯，沒有太過華麗的雕琢但感情好真。是結尾也是開始的尾末，讓人希望他們可以找到幸福或……找到彼此！

7 years ago

謝謝啦😂😂

短文比長篇難好多🙊..
要在短短的文章內交代好多東西...

7 years ago

@柳絮飛時,真的，短篇重精煉，不過這也算是一種另類的練習ＸＤ

7 years ago

@滄藍, 對阿!! 短篇也滿好玩的XD
現在也在找別的來寫看看!!

7 years ago

@柳絮飛時, 可以練習越來越精練的寫法，可是也別忘了長篇XDD

7 years ago

@滄藍,遵命😂😂😂同時進行！！

7 years ago

@柳絮飛時,哈哈我擅長敲碗催更（不

7 years ago

@柳絮飛時,哈哈我擅長敲碗催更（不

7 years ago

@滄藍, 你這自嘲感覺有血有淚😆😆😆

7 years ago

@柳絮飛時, 是的，故事很多（抹淚（很愛演

7 years ago

Back to Comments

×

Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically

Reset to default

X

× People Who Like This

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.