1. The fact that Melanie argues her mom for forcing the crown on her. 2. Mom sounds like she hates her husband. 3. Stevens felt so sad for losing his dad. (So he is Melanie's brother? I hope I'm not wrong).
I look forward to knowing the reason of these 3 important points that I assume are caused by the same reason.
@sltb1996, What do you want me to do as a collaborator? I think at the moment I can only act as a proof reader not an idea contributor. Because I'm still focusing on my own story too. Hehe.
1. The fact that Melanie argues her mom for forcing the crown on her.
2. Mom sounds like she hates her husband.
3. Stevens felt so sad for losing his dad. (So he is Melanie's brother? I hope I'm not wrong).
I look forward to knowing the reason of these 3 important points that I assume are caused by the same reason.
It's very exciting!