Hi, there! Your story is awesome~ It's very inspiring. I'll rate it 9/10!
So, I suggested an edit but there are a few lines I don't understand so I cannot edit them. For example: -They talked and talked. The stars were disappeared in the firmament. When the sky was floated gold, it was time to say goodbye. -The boy left with wind.
It's very inspiring. I'll rate it 9/10!
So, I suggested an edit but there are a few lines I don't understand so I cannot edit them. For example:
-They talked and talked. The stars were disappeared in the firmament. When the sky was floated gold, it was time to say goodbye.
-The boy left with wind.
By the way, loved the story~ 😄