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滄藍
嗯？結尾的意思是，其實前面都是最後這個迪恩寫出來的故事嗎？
6 years ago
紙緣
是啊！是他將經歷過的事情寫下來的故事！(結尾是否寫得有點混亂
6 years ago
滄藍
@紙緣, 與其說混亂，不如說突兀（？）
6 years ago
紙緣
@滄藍, 原本是想弄一個open ending, 結果還是搞歪了 (汗
感謝滄藍姐的意見和支持！下個故事我會改進的！
6 years ago
滄藍
@紙緣, 沒沒沒，沒什麼意見啦，別這麼說
6 years ago
紙緣
@滄藍, 沒關係，多聽點意見和感想才會進步吧！(其實在寫下一個故事了
6 years ago
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