I enjoyed it. I found a few grammatical errors, but other than that, you are very descriptive and capture the scenes very well. You write with a lot of expression; it is a very unique writing style:)
Well, I am always open for edit suggestions. Hahaha. Thanks for that! 😁 Geez, I might be absen for days here due to work here. Gonna miss your work, reading stories and commenting. 😅
Geez, I might be absen for days here due to work here. Gonna miss your work, reading stories and commenting. 😅