Good story so far! Cynthia's faith is admirable and it will be good to see how it plays a role in the way she perceives and reacts to the world and people around her. I can relate to her skepticism around Genesis, I too don't really believe in something until I know it well. I also find the conflict surrounding Gee Kay to be interesting and wonder what kind of trouble it may cause later on.
My only complaint is that Cynthia is from Indonesia and therefore from a different culture but she appears to make little notice of any differences between her culture and the American one that she is surrounded by. Unless she has been to the United States before, her apparent familiarity with the people and places doesn't make much sense. I think some observations on how she sees the country she is in would add some interest and depth to her.
Oh, well.. Yeah, I should have done more observation for Cynthia. Hehehe. And thanks a lot so far, you've been helping me in editing and giving me inputs. Means a lot to me. 😁😁😁
My only complaint is that Cynthia is from Indonesia and therefore from a different culture but she appears to make little notice of any differences between her culture and the American one that she is surrounded by. Unless she has been to the United States before, her apparent familiarity with the people and places doesn't make much sense. I think some observations on how she sees the country she is in would add some interest and depth to her.
Anyway, I look forward to reading more!
And thanks a lot so far, you've been helping me in editing and giving me inputs.
Means a lot to me. 😁😁😁
Hope you enjoy it till the end.