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Aretice N. Treader
Well, I'm glad you developed the principal's character a little more, even if the Doctor as the principal still feels a little ooc. I think this chapter could have been combined with the first chapter to make both seem more complete. Most of what I mentioned in my comment on the first chapter still stands for this one.
Shadow15243
After Re Reading My Story I Can See How Your Confused, 1. The Principal is not 10 I probably worded it in a way that would make it seem so but 10 is actually John but now that I Look even Deeper This is Not Supposed to be the same doctor, Also ill make sure to look at grammar and punctuation and ill remake the first 2 chapters because i didn't like the way they felt anyways. But I Will be happy if you could re read it after i fix it Up. : )
Aretice N. Treader
@Shadow15243, Oh! I'm sorry for mixing up your characters, then. I'll be happy to read the rewritten chapters. :)
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