Sorry I couldn't read all of this, I don't really go well with longer stories. I'm a HW and Linkle fan, though, so I had to check this out. I like the concept and the fact that you don't seem to pretend like every other person magically knows her story from the game, but that you fill the reader in little by little. I did notice some spelling and punctuation errors early on, since that's how far I came for now. That ' tilde is very nasty when it comes to abbreviations that can look like other words, like I'll and ill, your and you're (gotta watch out for those!)
It's alright, I'm glad you gave it a look at all, this is pretty long, on FanFiction.net I've posted fourteen(?) chapters of this, plus two spin offs, so...yeah, that'll be a lot.
Yeah, I think I saw what you're talking about, I've got some stuff to fix, huh?
Yeah, I think I saw what you're talking about, I've got some stuff to fix, huh?