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凪ノ日常
作者安安，偶然坐在公車上滑著手機發現了這篇文章，感覺內容很有趣。不過一般對話都會用上引號「和下引號」來表示，這一點有點不習慣。
  還有個人認為對話後的（）可以用敘述的方式寫出來，不用使用括號

             以上是鄙人在下拙者我的拙見>_<
7 years ago
漆柒
太謝謝你了 這是我第一次寫東西還什麼都不懂我會改進的 謝謝><！！！
7 years ago
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