I've read the first couple of chapters having just arrived at work after receiving your message.I think at 14 y/o you've certainly got the potential to be a very good fictional writer. You certainly don't lack confidence. I've not posted any stories on this website yet and I'm a lot older than you are!Keep up the good work and remember to keep reading profusely.John Kennedy Toole's Neon Bible may provide some inspiration. Written whilst he was 16 & published posthumously.