Your writing is well done and the narration has a smooth flow. You manage to immerse the reader into the dystopian setting of the story (the 18+ warning is certainly there for a reason) and create interest around Zeiss and the mysterious creature he comes across.
Your writing is well done and the narration has a smooth flow. You manage to immerse the reader into the dystopian setting of the story (the 18+ warning is certainly there for a reason) and create interest around Zeiss and the mysterious creature he comes across.
I'm eager to read the next chapters.