Enjoyed the POV shift here quite a bit. It was interesting to be able to see the world from the perspective of someone more knowledgeable about magic. Speaking of which the lore for magic presented in this chapter was fascinating. Really excited to catch up and learn more about the magic system and its history.
Nice to hear! Yeah I also enjoyed writing from someone who knows things, it is fun to let him observe the world without explaining everything and let the readers wonder. There is a whole lot of set up in these first chapters, and I'm finally getting to the point that I starting to pay some off.
As for the magic. Not tooting my own horn here, but I'm really proud of the magic theory of this world. For the first half of the book we will be mostly explore how magic is used though. There is a character in the second half who is an expert and will give the opportunity to dive into this lore more.
As for the magic. Not tooting my own horn here, but I'm really proud of the magic theory of this world. For the first half of the book we will be mostly explore how magic is used though. There is a character in the second half who is an expert and will give the opportunity to dive into this lore more.