Hello? Is this the psychiatrist? Yes, you see, I have a friend that needs help. Lots of it.
Wow, George! (I'm going to keep trying to guess your name.) I did not see that coming! Quite intriguing. I feel like we have the next Stephen King on our hands.
There are a couple grammatical errors in here, just so you know.
@Bengolong,I meant the overall storyline is done well.
The mistakes are kind of all over. When quoting someone, you need to make sure you have a comma/period/exclamation point/question mark after the quote, but before the closing quotation marks. Examples-
"He told me to do it," I said. "Can you believe that?" I asked. "He did it!" I exclaimed. "Now we are in for it." I took my phone out of my purse.
Also, just to have correct grammar, (and someone can correct me on this if I am wrong) when a personal pronoun is the subject of the sentence, it is "I" not "me" and is used last if there are other subjects.
@Bengolong, Well, Jason, I don't actually know. Why do we say "grab" and "grabbed" but not "spin" and "spinned". Don't ask me about the English language. It is what it is.
@Bengolong,I was completely kidding. I don't know who either of those guys are. I looked them up and literally saw the first picture that came up. and yes, I have no problem judging fictional character.
Wow, George! (I'm going to keep trying to guess your name.) I did not see that coming! Quite intriguing. I feel like we have the next Stephen King on our hands.
There are a couple grammatical errors in here, just so you know.
But seriously, well done!
The mistakes are kind of all over. When quoting someone, you need to make sure you have a comma/period/exclamation point/question mark after the quote, but before the closing quotation marks. Examples-
"He told me to do it," I said.
"Can you believe that?" I asked.
"He did it!" I exclaimed.
"Now we are in for it." I took my phone out of my purse.
Also, just to have correct grammar, (and someone can correct me on this if I am wrong) when a personal pronoun is the subject of the sentence, it is "I" not "me" and is used last if there are other subjects.
CORRECT- I went to the beach.
WRONG- Me and John went to the beach.
CORRECT- John and I went to the beach.
Does that help?
And it is good to meet you, James Morgan Mcgill. I’m Florence Pugh.
And yes. I am that type of person. I stalk people every chance I get.
Why didn't I think of this before- Johnny!
Mr. Trevor, it's a pleasure. I'm Bella Swan.
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