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Reply - 平凡特別 | Penana

Reply - 平凡特別

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這個「平凡」的部分感覺沒有很紮實，
有種前面鋪墊不足的感覺，
所以後面反轉起來，沒那麼震憾……吧🙈

2 years ago

謝謝評論，可能鋪陳得不夠好。

2 years ago

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