FIRST! Wow, the emotion this gave me was just beautiful. This was written very well. They're were a few mistakes here and there, but that is beside the point. Good job. Keep up the good work! ~Melody~
Melody, thanks so much for your feedback!! Really really appreciate it! I am new to writing and English is not even my first language! f you don't mind pointing out some of the mistakes you noticed that would be wonderful!!!