Yet I would've enjoy more details when Jason and Emily was about to make out, but I know it would've been quite against the flow and spirit of the story. Still, you did a great job like always :D
Yeah, like you said, it did pose a threat to the flow so I kept it short with an element of daring nature on Emily's part. Plus I wanted Janet to see them just in time too :))
@weirdguy96, I'm not talking about mature scenes lol, I don't read mature stories. When I'm talking about details, I'm referring to taste, scents for instance. I don't know if you understand where I'm aiming at.