Search stories, writers or societies
Continue ReadingClear All
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Login with Facebook
or Sign up/Login to leave a comment. 
×
Write down what you like about the story
and then Add to home screen.
鶄提到可以改善的部分確實有點出一些我疏忽，或者沒寫好的地方，我會再想想的，果然自己寫的東西還是需要別人來審視，才能收獲更多不同角度的觀點XD
再次感謝你的評價！