I've read very few stuff in my life that hit me as hard as this one. And damn Andrew, this isn't even an official printed novel. I can proudly say that it is an honor to have read such beautiful work even before it was published. And I will forever talk about this piece especially when it hits the stores or even be turned into a movie.
I've never read anything so real and so emotive. You wrote the scenes with brilliance and grace. I'm feeling a bit emotional right now and reading the first few paragraphs of this chapter hit me in the gut real hard. There is such joy in me that I was able to go through this journey with Puck, Nova and Rick. I haven't even read the last remaining chapters and I already feel like you've succeeded.
The broken 3 word motif was so good and satisfying, I swear. Cause it was like finding the perfect words and it fit the situation at hand. That's just some beautiful device like you set it up for most of the chapters and decide to break it at the very best time cause its the most appropriate thing to do. That just takes a level of genius to pull off.
I'm really proud of you man and I hope more people read this. And I really wish great success for you.
Why, thank you from the bottom of my heart. It people who put the time and energy into encouragement and feedback that keep me going, it really is. Thanks Alef.
I've never read anything so real and so emotive. You wrote the scenes with brilliance and grace. I'm feeling a bit emotional right now and reading the first few paragraphs of this chapter hit me in the gut real hard. There is such joy in me that I was able to go through this journey with Puck, Nova and Rick. I haven't even read the last remaining chapters and I already feel like you've succeeded.
The broken 3 word motif was so good and satisfying, I swear. Cause it was like finding the perfect words and it fit the situation at hand. That's just some beautiful device like you set it up for most of the chapters and decide to break it at the very best time cause its the most appropriate thing to do. That just takes a level of genius to pull off.
I'm really proud of you man and I hope more people read this. And I really wish great success for you.