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紅色的北極熊
坦白説.....很尷尬，明知黑白要下凡了，然後一直在拖在解釋某某背景、人物互動。這讓我想起電影飢餓遊戲2。水字數太嚴重了。

最後引用一下Youtuber 超粒方讚揚英雄聯盟動畫的一句話：「既然是從小到大成長的土地，自然就不需要互相解釋對於他們來説理所當然的事物與規則。」
3 months ago
艾米莉
謝謝大大的意見^^ 我也有意識到開首節奏的問題，目前在思考該如何修訂。
3 months ago
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