I read this chapter again and I'm just reminded of how awestruck I was reading this. It was definitely one of those pieces that is so strong and moving. It reminded me of when I first read The Perks of Being a Wallflower. There was beauty in the way you wrote this chapter and damn this alone could make a really great one-off piece. I tried reading it aloud with expressions of course and it was so beautiful, the pacing and the use of words were rightly timed. Maybe I'll record myself one day reading this chapter alone. This was a really beautiful piece Andrew.