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夜臨
本章有兩段設定插入（或者說歷史），或許可以讓女主角閱讀報紙時，順應內容有所連結並順勢帶入，不然會稍顯突兀。

其他敘述都蠻好的。
7 months ago
aquilayellow13
感謝大大QwQ

本來是有參考了一下空戰奇兵系列開頭的方式來描述，不過又怕說一瞬間帶入資訊量太大就用了這個插入的方式，不過這樣會突兀的話⋯⋯之後再回頭修了OTL
7 months ago
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