Loved this piece of work. Like Gill mentioned earlier though the grammar is definitely something that should be improved upon. Also, I find in stories it's best to always type things out in the past tense... I'm not sure why, but it's a piece of information that my good friend and editor Lester told me. So I am passing it on to you. That being said though I must give you props... I couldn't write a slice of life piece like this right now. Nicely done