Holy shit! I suggest you make this into an entire series!
I mean I enjoyed the plot. Fantastic detailing and the transformation was great. Maybe in the series you could explain how she came to be half hunter. It's not like hunting your own kinds changes your scent! Maybe show her struggle between her youtube persona and The hunter. Hunting down the vamps around her. Also maybe a few subscribers of hers could stalk and then join her team or something.That would make a cliche but good story
Wow! Thanks! ^.^ I thought this would be too special for anyone to like it. The main character here appears (soon) in my vampire novel "Blood & Fire". After written this entry I wondered if I should sort of take it over into the novel with few details adjusted. The character has been in my mind for a long time. Cheers! ^.^
I mean I enjoyed the plot. Fantastic detailing and the transformation was great. Maybe in the series you could explain how she came to be half hunter. It's not like hunting your own kinds changes your scent! Maybe show her struggle between her youtube persona and The hunter. Hunting down the vamps around her. Also maybe a few subscribers of hers could stalk and then join her team or something.That would make a cliche but good story
Cheers! ^.^