Okay, your characters are amazing. I just like them more as the story goes along, honestly. (I mean, they do have faults, but that's okay because you want your characters to be realistic, too.) I like that the pace doesn't feel like it's moving too slow or too fast (although I tend to like things at a slower pace than most prefer, so I don't know if I'm a good indicator or not). There were a few missing words ("…listens to you [when] he's interested…"), but that can easily be edited (if you plan on doing that).