Like Bubblegumgabber, my overall first impression with this prologue chapter is very positive. You manage to introduce the readers into your fictional world with a compelling grim and mysterious atmosphere that gets their attention.
Also, despite I'm not a native English speaker (I've read plenty of published works in English though), I feel that your prose is quite good and well written. I will definitely keep reading to see where this is going.
Also, despite I'm not a native English speaker (I've read plenty of published works in English though), I feel that your prose is quite good and well written. I will definitely keep reading to see where this is going.