I really love your story! It's so vibrant, yet dark in a way that makes you stay engaged to the story, Veny in-particular. I also loved your formatting. It is almost exactly 20 mins to read, which is what the average adult reads from a chapter. That also means that you have at least or more than 5000 words for your chapter. I admire your perseverance to continue. I find it quite difficult to make my chapters long, but you've given me motivation. When I finish the second chapter of my story, your skill will be evident on my works! Keep it up!Zealous Feet
I find it quite difficult to make my chapters long, but you've given me motivation. When I finish the second chapter of my story, your skill will be evident on my works!
Keep it up!Zealous Feet