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⋆*・゚:⋆*・゚☽Harmony Haven ☾
This is lovely! Keep it up. I really enjoy such a story like so. Let me know if there is anything you might need help with or another idea!
1 year ago
zahhh_
thank you so much i will definitely take you up on your offer soon <33
1 year ago
zahhh_
do you have any ideas, i just posted my latest chapter and i don't know how to continue it 😺
1 year ago
⋆*・゚:⋆*・゚☽Harmony Haven ☾
@zahhh_, I would start on an issue or story plot change. Give a bit less emotion and more of a drama part to it. Maybe a little conflict between them after lies are told. That could spike the reader's interest more and keep them on edge about what might happen next. If not conflict, bring in a third character to maybe get in between them. Test it out and see if you like it. If you need an example of that kind of stuff, Pm me and i'll send you one.
1 year ago
zahhh_
@Yamazaki Kaiza, I like the second idea, i was gonna bring a second yandere in and have him get noticed by h/n and the guy would try to steal h/n from y/n
1 year ago
⋆*・゚:⋆*・゚☽Harmony Haven ☾
@zahhh_, Ok then! Lemmie know if you need help ^-^
1 year ago
zahhh_
@Yamazaki Kaiza, alright thank you so much for the help, i really appreciate it <33
1 year ago
⋆*・゚:⋆*・゚☽Harmony Haven ☾
@zahhh_, ofc!
1 year ago
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