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Coen Wonder
Interesting beginning. The dialogue is natural and many details are shown through the voice mail. Other than some missed punctuations, the story reads quite well.
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Thanks. Sorry I'm doing it on a mobile phone so it's a little difficult to go back and catch everything. Thanks again for review!
Coen Wonder
No worries:) Carry on!
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