Love the worldbuilding and Greek history in this one. Also, MEDUSA'S BACK?! And the badass grandma let's go!
The wings growing seemed a bit too quick, maybe if you added more detail about the pain, or even her feeling the wings grow could make it a more painful and magical process.
Also: "Why would Nike give me wings?" (Redbull gives you wingsssssss)
The wings growing seemed a bit too quick, maybe if you added more detail about the pain, or even her feeling the wings grow could make it a more painful and magical process.
Also:
"Why would Nike give me wings?"
(Redbull gives you wingsssssss)