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ItsAmelia
Forgetting the birthday is a little cliche, and the dad's reaction seemed rushed. But I love the mention of nymphs and her outfit in the end.
K.A.W Wolfe
Yea, thx for the review, should his reaction be a bit slower?
ItsAmelia
@K.A.W Wolfe, yeah, like a bit more thoughtful and reluctant to share his thoughts.
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