This is incredible! I love ur use of rhyming and your message behind the poem! You have a lovely style of writing! I like the metaphors / similes or comparisons in general. You did a wonderful job symbolizing the different people of this world and how you don't have to follow that same path others have chosen. Sometimes, a simple life is all you need to be happy. No need for riches, or fame. You can live a life of joy with something as simple as living in an apartment with your pet dog named Floofy. Ideas can vary with different people, but the message you want to convey with this poem is quite clear so good job on that! Love the poem!