Oh dear, poor Allison :(. I'm still liking the story and it's interesting to see how these two teens deal with their issues. I hope to see more! Some errors: 1. "Torcher" in the first line should be "torture'.2. "If I did y "purging" Just change 'y' to 'by'3. "to-skinny" should be "too-skinny"4. "I cut to deep" and "to-deep" 'To' in both cases should be 'too'
Some errors:
1. "Torcher" in the first line should be "torture'.2. "If I did y "purging" Just change 'y' to 'by'3. "to-skinny" should be "too-skinny"4. "I cut to deep" and "to-deep" 'To' in both cases should be 'too'