This is a really well written and humorous story! You interweave the drama with the comedic but natural conversations very well - everything flows forward in a realistic manner while at the same time being over the top which really suits this combination of tragedy/rom-com. There are no spelling/grammatical errors that I could pick up on, and the language you use is very well-thought out and conversational. Characters are similar to some teenage archetypes but you add your own touches to make them feel exciting and unique. Sam's parents just seem to hang around for expositional purposes though, but it's not a big issue! I usually don't read a lot of romance/comedy, but this was very nicely done and I enjoyed every chapter up so far! :)
Thank you!! I'll see if I can do something about Sam's parents. Meanwhile, I just looked at two of your poems and I thought they were extremely heartfelt and beautiful. I left a comment on each one with a little more detail. Sorry I couldn't provide anything very constructive, but I really enjoyed your works :)