So this is what attraction is like! Anyway, I think this was a good chapter. There are some repetitive words, I suggest changing up the diction a bit. Also, I agree that, if there's more character introductions, give us more info on them. I'm wondering how her prescriptions will play a part in this story. That's it for now.
Anyway, I think this was a good chapter. There are some repetitive words, I suggest changing up the diction a bit. Also, I agree that, if there's more character introductions, give us more info on them. I'm wondering how her prescriptions will play a part in this story. That's it for now.