I got shivers from that ending! I wonder if Elizabeth would've been queen if Anne had been exiled instead. I guess I'll just have to keep reading!
One criticism I'd like to point out though is that you suddenly switch to Cromwell's POV at some point in the chapter. I think it's better to stay in one POV so that it won't be confusing for readers. If you REALLY do need to switch POV's, it's good to indicate it with a break.
But other than that, amazing work! I always have trouble with historical fiction but I can easily tell you're such a natural at it! Fantastic job!!!
Thank you! I have a habit of slipping into different POV's and I never quite know when I'm doing it... it just sort of happens. I will try and either cut down on it or make it more obvious that it's changed POV! Thanks!
One criticism I'd like to point out though is that you suddenly switch to Cromwell's POV at some point in the chapter. I think it's better to stay in one POV so that it won't be confusing for readers. If you REALLY do need to switch POV's, it's good to indicate it with a break.
But other than that, amazing work! I always have trouble with historical fiction but I can easily tell you're such a natural at it! Fantastic job!!!