You know whats a better definition for gruesome? - macbre murders issue2.
Now i know that i am very fainthearted and honestly at some point i almost skipped some lines. God you can write, can't you? i can still feel my stomach queasing, that painted some horrible pictures in my head. If gruesome and freaking readers was your aim, i'd say you nailed it.
@Lata,don't be. I just have a really good imagination and you've got a way with words.. A dangerous combination. Some people love gory and gruesome....keep at it. Trust me you are really good at it.
Now i know that i am very fainthearted and honestly at some point i almost skipped some lines. God you can write, can't you? i can still feel my stomach queasing, that painted some horrible pictures in my head. If gruesome and freaking readers was your aim, i'd say you nailed it.
*Locks Jess up in a dingy dungeon room and throws the damn key too far away*
Gonna go do that right now.