I really like this. The tone is very dreery and the languange you used in story support the tone of this story perfectly. It almost reminds me of a teen slasher flick with the way you describe things and the way you go about narrating the victim's killing.
I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Maybe a more peaceful death next time? Or maybe something even more violent? Who knows.
I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Maybe a more peaceful death next time? Or maybe something even more violent? Who knows.
I felt it was rather tame, ya know considering that it's just a pillow. Let's see what strikes my fancy, but i think it'll be a violent one.