This was entertaining and the dark ending gave a very nice touch to the story and theme.
Although I didn't feel close to Jean, and it will be better if he shows more fear, is terrified but doesn't say it explicitly. But otherwise, his monologue was often funny and on point.
As for the witch, she is comical but maybe some hints of the true nature beneath her words can be hinted in her actions, and that despite being chatty, she will will not let someone go.
But otherwise, pretty good job as to this. I didn't feel it dragged, or anything that was particularly off.
Although I didn't feel close to Jean, and it will be better if he shows more fear, is terrified but doesn't say it explicitly. But otherwise, his monologue was often funny and on point.
As for the witch, she is comical but maybe some hints of the true nature beneath her words can be hinted in her actions, and that despite being chatty, she will will not let someone go.
But otherwise, pretty good job as to this. I didn't feel it dragged, or anything that was particularly off.