This was the only critic that came to mind: "A green dress with a blue sash? Those colors so don't go!" But if blue holds a significant meaning, I won't tell you to change it. I loved the description that went into the first part of the story and I could visualize it so perfectly. I do find it a bit odd that Eve has wings as I am so used to the bible stories of her and Adam being normal humans, but this is a very interesting twist. Keep it up!