Wow, this was interesting! It made me feel very unnerved at the point where he grabbed the knife. Because it was so tense, I was expecting a shocking ending, but all the tension was relieved at the last minute, haha. I might have liked a darker way of ending it (wow what's wrong with me, I used to love happy endings but now I'm becoming twisted! XD) but your writing is fantastic and I will read more of your stories! ;)