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Emy
"so barren and lifeless as to be mistaken for a photograph of some grim Depression-era stock photo" From here on is sooo good!!! I'm really impressed !
mdhector41
Thanks. I think I might have started too late with the car drive sequence and I'd like to make the later segments less-preachy. But thanks for the for the kind words.
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