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玼瑕
第三集還是想吐槽……(遠目)
所以說,燈子本來跟狩人大姊姊要一起去晉見女神,然後被水沖走,然後跟煌四會合被送去避難、在避難所遇到燠火家的女僕被送去大豪宅、在大豪宅富商女而被神族綁走燈子被搖火的謎之音喚走、然後遇到隔離區的樹人、木之神族跑出來講講話就又跑掉……然後看起來煌四要找燈子會合
嗯,三小?
雖然劇情現在是大混仗的場面,但不代表敘事寫得很混沌能讓觀眾接受啊!!!!更何況這敘事方式是讓主角跑到某地點,然後幾名角色冒出來講設定、再跑到下一個地點,再安排別的角色講設定,搭配鬼畜的作畫跟意義不明的意象?
2 months ago
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所以說,燈子本來跟狩人大姊姊要一起去晉見女神,然後被水沖走,然後跟煌四會合被送去避難、在避難所遇到燠火家的女僕被送去大豪宅、在大豪宅富商女而被神族綁走燈子被搖火的謎之音喚走、然後遇到隔離區的樹人、木之神族跑出來講講話就又跑掉……然後看起來煌四要找燈子會合
嗯,三小?
雖然劇情現在是大混仗的場面,但不代表敘事寫得很混沌能讓觀眾接受啊!!!!更何況這敘事方式是讓主角跑到某地點,然後幾名角色冒出來講設定、再跑到下一個地點,再安排別的角色講設定,搭配鬼畜的作畫跟意義不明的意象?